Volume Thoughts, and Thanks – Volume Thoughts, and Thanks

In the outline I made, the Holy Grail incident is over, which means that half of this volume has been completed. According to the current subscription, it's not bad.

The current subscription is the mid-term result of Da Feng, which is very impressive for a book. It's just that I'm not very satisfied, but there's nothing I can do. I'll slowly improve.

Before starting, I spent a long time on the outline and plan. The Holy Grail incident is a plot that connects the past and the future, with many foreshadowing and hidden plots. Some can be noticed by readers, while others go unnoticed.

In terms of overall control and the structure of the entire book, I believe that everyone still has confidence in me.

Let me talk about my feelings when writing this plot. First, there is a lack of balance. The level of the incident is too high, and as a low-level practitioner, the protagonist's involvement in the incident will not be too high. In simple terms, he doesn't have many opportunities to show off.

In front of a group of powerful experts, if the protagonist keeps showing off, it would be too forced and unreasonable.

Actually, when I was halfway through writing, I realized this problem. Because it is a modern theme, I can't just order someone to solve the case within three days, like an emperor saying "Off with their heads!"

In a modern setting, I can't have such operations. So, I was once very troubled about how to highlight the protagonist's presence.

This is the risk of changing the theme. I lack experience in writing something I haven't written before, so I may make mistakes.

Fortunately, everyone has been very patient with me, and I have a good grasp of writing, so I kept "asking the spirits" to increase the protagonist's involvement.

During the process, although some readers complained that it wasn't exciting enough, the subscriptions have been steadily increasing. Yes, it has reached 60,000, which is worth celebrating.

Although I added the progression of the Holy Grail incident, the most important thing is that I wrote it out completely and achieved the effect I expected.

Returning to the main topic, the outline of the Spirit Realm is even more detailed than fighting scenes, but this is not a good thing. It's because the structure is too tight that when you know there is a problem with this plot, you can't stop it.

Because it is closely related to the subsequent events, it affects the whole story. This can be considered as a warning to fellow authors. I asked Octopus a long time ago, I said, "Is it true that the mysterious structure is good and your outline is very detailed?"

Octopus said, "My outline is rough, and I mostly write and supplement it as I go."

I thought to myself, this big-eyed soft-bodied animal must be fooling me.

Now, I have to admit that what he said is true.

Next, I will focus on the events of the middle and low levels, allowing the protagonist to have a better involvement (showing off). However, after writing the Holy Grail plot for almost half a month, I can't get into that state anymore.

Tomorrow, I will spend half a day to work on the detailed outline and correct my state.

Next is the highlight: thanks to the "Zhai Cai" expert's Golden Alliance. Where is the expert's address? I will clean myself up and hand it over.

The first Golden Alliance in the Spirit Realm is born. When I was chatting with the expert Zhai Cai yesterday, he said he would give me a Golden Alliance. I thought he was joking.

I didn't expect him to be so determined, and the next day, it really went up to the Golden Alliance.

Impressive!

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I wanted to add it today, but after making changes, I found it very difficult. Based on my current writing state, it's really difficult.

I haven't written this kind of theme in the Spirit Realm before, and after it goes online, I feel like I'm walking on thin ice, afraid of messing it up. That's why I haven't updated it. It's between 6,000 and 7,000 words every day, which is far less than others who update over 10,000 words a day.

If it were a Xianxia genre, my writing speed would probably be faster, as I have the experience of Da Feng as a foundation.

The pain and charm of trying a new theme ends here. It's both painful and enjoyable.

Although I can't add it, I am deeply moved by the expert's Golden Alliance.

Once I get more comfortable with writing, I will find a way to make it up to him.

Thank you, expert, for the Golden Alliance!

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